Haiku 1

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Haiku I wrote when thinking of summer days soon to dissapear.

Haiku 1

Grass reaching up high,
Flowers waving in the breeze,
Sunshine warming me.

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kdarcy commented on Haiku 1

10-23-2010

Recently discovered haiku, love it, well done on the summer write, be well k

blueberry commented on Haiku 1

09-10-2010

Nice Haiku! A wonderful way of describing the summer days.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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