Good-bye

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  • Sadness

    Good-bye
    no way
    don't want it
    no more
    just can't
    go on
    don't need it
    give up
    no choice
    too far
    too deep
    good-bye
    who cares
    i don't
    it's over
    i'm weak
    just push
    i'll fall
    will break
    no hope
    too late
    good-bye

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    JLorian commented on Good-bye

    03-02-2009

    Nice visual... I loved the part, "Just push, I'll fall". Keep writing. You have a distinctive style.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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