Good Bye

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    Good Bye

    Good-bye my love, I am dying today.
    Everyday Ive been dying in little ways.
    I open my eyes to you, and the lies come thru into view.
    Do you remember when things were new.
    My love, I am dying today.
    Do you remember the world we saw together.
    And things could never be any better.
    Good bye my love.
    I know where you slept last night.
    Dont worry love its quite alright.
    I can no longer stand this fight.
    Alone I stand on sands of emptiness,
    Filled with oceans of sadness.
    I wonder if we even exist.
    Goodbye my love.
    I have been, I was there,caught in love's blind stare, unaware.
    Enclosed in memory of your last kiss.
    I wonder if we'll even be missed.

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    origionalmerlin commented on Good Bye

    03-22-2009

    we all learn to love more, in the long run..

    Worthless commented on Good Bye

    02-12-2009

    I've realized thru time and even now that all love must be fake. It's not worth the pain and hearbreak. Sure you get over it but you never seem to foget it!

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Good Bye

    12-24-2008

    (cont) bring it out well. I enjoyed that. Keep it up!

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Good Bye

    12-24-2008

    Read "Never Say Good-bye"; so you know I had to read "Good-bye"! :) I actually enjoyed this one better. Finality is an emotion that touches so much more than heart break in a context of lovers. Finality is a deep and intense emotion. You bring it ou

    litldeer commented on Good Bye

    12-23-2008

    This is beautiful. I feel your pain. Hang in there honey. Things will get better and you'll find a new and more passionate love.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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