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A poetry challengewrite a poem with the title "welcome to hell" and post it. when you do just reply here with a quick "hell posted" so who ever wants to can go read you hell. " |
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Re: A poetry challengeHell Posted |
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Re: A poetry challengeI DON'T THINK THIS HELL MOOT IS A HELLISHLY GOOD IDEA--lol Last edited by cousinsoren 05-18-2009 at 01:39:52 PM |
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Originally Posted by cousinsoren I DON'T THINK THIS HELL MOOT IS A HELLEISHLY GOOD IDEA--lol There was a man who wne to church only when he was drunk. The preacher , on night service, shouted, "Brityhers and Sisters, all who want to go to heaven , please stand and raise your hand. Everybody stood, except the drunk. He fried to rise, but he was too drunk to do so. , "Brother, why are you sitting?" asked the preacher. Answered the drunk, " Unnu gwaan an' leave me! Lock up di church an' left me! Mi soon come!" ( Go ahead! Lock up the church and leave me. I'll soon come!" ) |
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Re: A poetry challengeso if u dont like the idea then don't do it. this isnt a slam to God or religion or anything like that. some people are going through hell of some kind right now if u r not then good for you. if you dont like my challenge then dont take it click on another page. no one asked u for your oppinion. |
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Re: Re: A poetry challengeQuote: Originally Posted by JadedJezzabel so if u dont like the idea then don't do it. this isnt a slam to God or religion or anything like that. some people are going through hell of some kind right now if u r not then good for you. if you dont like my challenge then dont take it click on another page. no one asked u for your oppinion. Ah-ah! I certainly got your hackles up! Uh ? You don't have to be rude. I read your poem "Welcome To Hell" and enjoyed it immensely. I am almost converted by its paradoxical sermon., to the extent that I'm thinking of going on a trip there-Lol. You are saintly devil at writing poetry , aren't you? -lol What I mean that after such a superb piece done by you, it's not a good idea for anyone to take up your challenge. You missed my wry humour-LOL I'll be reading all your poems. A Herculean task, isn;t it? But I shall do it, However, refrain from being so intolerably acidic to your gentle critics, It is incompatible with your beauty and feminine grace. You are hot stuff-I mean your poetry is hot stuff. Under what star were you born,,may I ask? Last edited by cousinsoren 05-19-2009 at 10:23:36 AM |
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Re: A poetry challengeJaddedJez, your anger towards "Cousinsoren" is hell itself in all of its verbal fire. Nice job! |
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Re: Re: A poetry challengeQuote: THANKS, dahlusion,Originally Posted by dahlusion JaddedJez, your anger towards "Cousinsoren" is hell itself in all of its verbal fire. Nice job! And there is no reason to be rude because placing anything in the Forum is asking for everyone's opinion, and everyone in entitled without being set on fire. Please, do not be so intimidated or insulted or frustrated or anything but poetically gentle. Peace. The erudite, very fiery and talented poetess obviously misconstrued my noble intention. I forgive her, and pray that she will behave more pleasantly in the future. Thanks again to come to my defence.--LOL. I really needed, this time, someone equipped with helmet , shield and spear. You came just in time! LOL. God bless you. Last edited by cousinsoren 06-09-2009 at 03:40:59 AM |
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Re: A poetry challengeWelcome To Hell |
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Check Out My Book: "The Psalters Of The Field"I am asking everyone to check out my book "The Psalters Of The Field" at www.lulu.com/thebookcastle1, you can preview it by clicking on the title of the book next to the book cover, on the next page simply click on the to go forward; click on the + to increase the font size and the - to decrease the font size. I pray you will find it a delight to read and get your copy today - thank you all - may God bless you and keep you all... Amen |
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Re: Re: A poetry challengeQuote: Originally Posted by kdavidscott1 Welcome To Hell Welcome to hell I'm glad that you came, You're stuck with me now with no one to blame. I spoke and you listened you completed my deed, The murder and mayhem the hearts you made bleed. The rapes you committed the lives that you took, Like the couple you killed while they sat at the brook. Your father and mother they raised just right, Showing you the light but you walked in the night. On their knees they stay praying that you'd be changed, You listened to my voice and became more deranged. That's when it all started you joined with my force, You killed the young and old completing the course. Your blood path reached heaven God gave me your name, Your parents sent their prayers I'm glad that you’ve came. Welcome to hell where you don't want to be, Your parents tried to tell you not to listen to me. When you started killing and the word got to them, They asked God to deal with you and all this mayhem. God gave you to me and said torture him well, So stop all that screaming and welcome to hell. Welcome To Hell – A Place Where You Don’t Want To Be…Amen Written By: David L. Scott excellent but you should have just posted it on your poems |
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Re: A poetry challengeWelcome back,it's been awhile - |
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Re: A poetry challengeQuote: Originally Posted by JadedJezzabel write a poem with the title "welcome to hell" and post it. when you do just reply here with a quick "hell posted" so who ever wants to can go read you hell. " "hell Posted" check it out Welcome To Hell written by Jadedjezzabel is a paradoxically crafted piece about the terrors of hell. This poem is a traumatic experience. Its overtones lurk in the memory READ ALSO DAVID SCOTT'S "WELCOME TO HELL" a milder but yet effective treatment of the theme of hell. Last edited by cousinsoren 05-20-2009 at 08:18:53 AM |
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Re: Re: A poetry challengeQuote: Originally Posted by JadedJezzabel if i misunderstood i'm sorry. no harm no foul and thank you for the compliment. Hi JadedJezzabel Your apology is accepted (Smile) I also accept 50% of the blame. I ought to have expressed what I had in mind more clearly. I just noticed that you had read David Scott's "WELCOME TO HELL." |
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Re: A poetry challengeHell posted!! |
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Re: Re: A poetry challengeQuote: i'm sorry i went to read your hell poem but could not find it |
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WELCOME TO HELLI thought you were an angel the day I met you Last edited by poett 05-20-2009 at 11:49:24 AM |
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Re: A poetry challengeHi..I'm new here...I read your post..and i loved it... |
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Re: A poetry challengeTo hell for my salvation;; |
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Re: A poetry challengeThe B, B, and G |
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Re: Re: Re: A poetry challengeQuote: Site is a bit wonky today...had a little trouble getting it to take. Tis there now, though. |
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Re: Re: Re: A poetry challengeQuote: Site is a bit wonky today...had a little trouble getting it to take. Tis there now, though. |
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Re: A poetry challengeRing the Bells of Hell- Look, if you can't listen. |
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Re: A poetry challengeJadedJezzabel, |
A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.
Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.