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A poetry challenge

09-17-2009 at 02:57:41 PM

Re: A poetry challenge

I love it and yeah its true many of us go through hell here on earth. I myself am going through hell today with so much pain I can't seem to block it with poetry nor singing so its killing me and sending me straight to hell Thanks for sharing it made me smile a bit I needed to smile wink

09-18-2009 at 11:43:32 AM

Re: A poetry challenge

Hell posted

10-29-2009 at 01:50:46 PM

welcome to hell

Welcome to hell where
all the demons dwell
Brimstone and pain
is the only name of the game,
Devils and friends
not where the god or lord lives,
Tortured souls deep
in the pit of the hole,
All ruled my screams
made of ghostly dreams,
No more flesh
to make worldly sins,
Unholy sounds
that are all a round,
Fallen angel deeds
all contracts complete,
No where to run
and nothing is fun,
Your wings are not
made out of feather,
But instead covered
in a leather,
Welcome to Hell………..
inkmaster

10-29-2009 at 01:52:53 PM

Re: A poetry challenge

welcome to hell.......
Welcome to hell where
all the demons dwell
Brimstone and pain
is the only name of the game,
Devils and friends
not where the god or lord lives,
Tortured souls deep
in the pit of the hole,
All ruled my screams
made of ghostly dreams,
No more flesh
to make worldly sins,
Unholy sounds
that are all a round,
Fallen angel deeds
all contracts complete,
No where to run
and nothing is fun,
Your wings are not
made out of feather,
But instead covered
in a leather,
Welcome to Hell………..
inkmaster

10-31-2009 at 04:55:25 AM

Re: A poetry challenge

right on inkmaster.......keep it flowin.

10-31-2009 at 06:25:39 PM

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i posted a poem, WELCOME TO HELL

12-13-2009 at 04:56:56 AM

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THANK YOU TO EVERYONE WHO TOOK PART OF THE CHALLENGE.....IF I DIDNT COMMENT ON YOUR POEM PERSONALLY IT WAS AN OVERSIGHT AND NOT INTENDED TO MEAN I DIDN'T LIKE YOUR POEM. I'VE JUST BEEN BUSY......I VERY MUCH ENJOYED ALL THE POEMS THAT WERE POSTED.

JADED

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.