Exposed

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    Poem Commentary

    Because lies left unexposed are empowered to destroy the goodness.

    Exposed

     Dare you really ask why?

    (I wrote this poem about you)

     

    Without an alert advising refrain, no reference to disdain;

    no wisdom from which to gain insight,

    You would remain a hope, in vain, you dirty stain!

     

    What a costly drain it was to obtain and sustain your pain.

    Oh, that I might train even one, who will ascertain!

     

    That is the main reason why! You must die, you lie.

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    HarverTomsson commented on Exposed

    12-21-2010

    A woman scorned hath one hellish muse. Erma Bombeck on a rant, I take it. Because you're through doing that anymore. Harv
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    slohan4u commented on Exposed

    12-21-2010

    very good. different rhyme pattern. did you really write it about me? LOL
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    Bjlo

    12/21/2010

    It couldn't be you! Actually, it was a fun little exercise - to take a word (mine was rain) and rhyme it as hard as you can in 1 minute; then write a thought about it (mine was: washes away dirt) and then write a poem without using it, in 3 minutes or less! It was fun and I am glad you liked it!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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