Erotic Dream

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    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

    Erotic Dream

    Last night I had a dream. It went like this.

    I saw you in bed, and wanted to give you a kiss.

    I knew I shouldn't; but I couldn't help myself.

    So slowly I bent over, wanting your lips to be felt.


    As I kissed you on the lips, you gently grabbed my waste.

    pulling me closer, staring me in the face.

    I suddenly realized, I had slightly grown.

    You realized it too. I could tell by your moan.


    You started rotating your hips. Now I'm as hard as a brick.

    Then from your ears on down, I began to lick.

    I ran my tongue down your neck, and around your breast.

    I felt your hands on my head, pushing toward your treasure chest.


    You slowly opened your legs, and put my head inside.

    I recognized my clue, that it was time to dine.

    As I sucked on your clit, your thighs were squeezing my head.

    If I didn't know they were legs, I would have sworn they were lead.


    I was enjoying the dream; but I knew there was more to come.

    So I fought to stay sleep, thinking I'm gonna get some.

    I tried to gather my senses, still lying in your bed.

    The circulation is just, about back in my head.


    It's off to the rest, of this erotic dream.

    You'd already squirted, and started begging to cream.

    As much as I love to tease, right then it was time to please.

    So I flipped you over, and propped you up, right on your knees.


    I got into position; and grabbed you by your hips.

    You reached back with your hands; and put my dick on your lips.

    Your pussy was so wet, I slid right on in.

    I was hitting you back and forth, till your head started to spin.


    You tried to pull away. You couldn't take no more.

    I started in at 12, and wasn't stopping till 4.

    I was about to bust a nut, in your pussy so soft,

    when all of a sudden RING!!!!!!! The alarm clock went off.




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    afresh30 commented on Erotic Dream

    10-03-2010

    Man.....that is all I can say...your soooo talented hypnotic voice, vivid imagery when you get that book together let me know I will buy one seriously I would buy a collection of your poems, keep being the real you, tell your lady she is lucky!!!12-4 with no viagra...teach these y'uns sumtin!!!

    FLAWLES

    10/07/2010

    Thanx for the comment. Yeah, I started in at 12; but I didn't mention what I used after a couple of minutes after I got it. :)

    SexyAssGurl commented on Erotic Dream

    09-22-2010

    I like that!! That was way hott until the alarm clock went off!! Dayum!!

    FLAWLES

    09/22/2010

    I'm glad you liked it. You can't imagine how many clocks got thrown and busted up off the wall. Thank you for your comment.

    SexyAssGurl

    09/29/2010

    I can imagine...lol. You are welcome. Let me read some more so I can see how much hotter it can get up in here!!

    FLAWLES

    10/02/2010

    Oh, it gets hotter and hotter

    Heather84 commented on Erotic Dream

    12-11-2009

    Wow that was very tensed i could feel every word great write keep it up ill be waiting for more

    FLAWLES

    09/03/2010

    Just like a woman. Yawl never get enuf. Ok, I'll try and give you somemore. Thanx for your comment.

    jkl1027 commented on Erotic Dream

    10-01-2009

    It has a vivid description of what happens to the persona's encounter. I feel that somehow the dream that the persona tries to tell the reader from the beginning of the poem is but a mere white lie because it seems so real. I can feel it. I can even feel you...

    FLAWLES

    10/16/2009

    The "Vividity" is exactly my target, regardless of the theme. When I write, My goal is to grab and hold on to the reader. Thank you for your words, They are greatly appreciated.

    carrieannjn commented on Erotic Dream

    08-31-2009

    WELL DAMM I WANT A DREAM LIKE THAT HELL I NEED ONE LOL I MUST SAY 12 TA 4 DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

    FLAWLES

    10/16/2009

    yep-perrrr! 12 ta 4 need I say more? Read it again and don't sleep lite. You will treat yourself to an "exotic dream" one night

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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