Confession Of Lust

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  • FLAWLES
  • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

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If there's a cure for this, I don't want it!

Confession Of Lust

Entangled within the tentacles of lust, I welcomed her grip.

 

I wish I could say I was helpless;  but from her fountain, I had to sip

 

As my sip evolved into a gulp, I choked on the depth of her need.

 

For her trance left a trail;  and I was eager to follow her lead.

 

 

She told me things that I could only, imagine in my dreams.

 

Now raging waters flow, where once was, a mild stream.

 

I’m trying to stay focused, because this can not be real.

 

But real it was, recognizing, my aluminum turned steal.

 

 

In between the miles we confessed, what was exactly on our minds.

 

And in an instance, all of  our tentacles, began to entwine.

 

So beware of your wildest dreams, they maybe just a schematic,

 

A plan you might say, one day, of you and your dream-mate, goin’ at it.

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1blackbarbie commented on Confession Of Lust

07-30-2009

This was a well written poem. I love the passion and time and thought you put into this. Especially the different parts of speech you used in your poem made it even more tasteful.

FLAWLES

10/16/2009

Hello b-barbie. Thank you for your compliments. I know I can be explicitly lewd; but I'm glad I can still write something of the same nature, while leaving the imagination wide open. Still, another inspiration from JADEMELISSA74.

Gracey commented on Confession Of Lust

07-20-2009

I loved this, ...from her fountain i had to slip..I thought that was very powerful, It gave me goose bumps. This is another one of your amazing poems. Keep writing.

FLAWLES

07/20/2009

Thank you too much Gracey. Sometimes the sticky web we weave, is exactly what we need.

jademelissa74 commented on Confession Of Lust

07-19-2009

Wow! This piece offers so much reflection upon the reader. Often times, we are faced with situations that to the naked eye, can not be real, yet, we must go on. Taking life, for what it is...a chance to the unknown! A well-written piece.

FLAWLES

07/19/2009

Well EB, I CAN say this came from an actual experience.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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