Emotionally Detach......

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There are many beautiful single mothers that have raised up some beautiful men. Some boys do well being raised only by a woman and then there are others who just don't. These confuse little boys soon grow up to be angery men and the ones that love them pays the price. The relationship between father and son is like no other. For these baby boys the male presents is a must for it is he and only he that can raise his boy into a man. Just my 2 cents, Infiniti

Emotionally Detach......

He wants to know love he wants to feel love but he can only give to one love.

Struggling to give what he never received, you see him in the flesh he say he's the best but emotionally detach from all the rest.
Dad can we play ball? 

Oh son I don't like ball can we just watch another movie. 

No dad I want to play ball just one time pleassss.......

I told you boy I don't do ball. Emotionally Detach that me and with no shame how dare you complain.
Sad to say I didn't see your pain until your almost 18 now it's to late to claim.

He wants to know love, he wants to feel love but he can only give to one love.  Emotionally Detach is my name ask me again and I'll tell you the same.

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Hampton commented on Emotionally Detach......

11-23-2009

This write highlights the sadness that can accompany the void between father and son due to absence or just plain negkect.

infiniti

11/23/2009

Very proud of this piece, thanks I'm please u liked it. Ininfinit

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infiniti’s Poems (21)

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The Day After........
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Foolish One 5
Closer Then Any Other 4
I Move You........ 3
Come Too Me...... 3
Emotionally Detach...... 1
20 Words Challenge,,,,
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Other People's Hell....... 3
What Happened? 2
Love Out Of Sight 3
Peace From Within 3
Brown Tears....... 3
What's In A Kiss....... 2
The Strength Of A Man.......... 2
A Ray Of Light 3
Are You Sure...... 2
Tormented Souls 4
Impulsive Love 4
Verbal Poems..... 6
How Can He Give...... 2
With Grace 6