Come Too Me......

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    Just a short sweet piece here. I have no clue as to whom I am speaking too. I guess if I was newly in love this is what I would
    say to him...........I guess, nevertheless it was just fun to write.

    Come Too Me......

    Come too me so
    you can see what was
    really meant to be.

    Come too me and sit
    down beside me

    Close your eyes so you
    so you can visualizes what's 
    in my mind.

    Come too me, build a furture with
    me, watch our children grow like pine
    trees.

    Come too me and lay down beside me.
    Pull me closer so we can feel the rythum
    of each others hearts

    Come too me and walk beside me as we grow
    old, your never be alone.

    Come too me and know that there's no other like me from sea to sea who can set your heart free.  Come Too Me

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    TREVON commented on Come Too Me......

    12-08-2011

    I like this poem. It drew me into you....................

    infiniti

    12/08/2011

    Good Morning Trevon, I am glad that you like it and hope u continue to read more. Please come and join me over on facebook under Infiniti Poetry also ckout poeticword.ning.com along with dyslexicbrain.ning.com. These are some of my sites promoting literacy. Thanks again ur friend in poetry, Infiniti

    infiniti

    12/08/2011

    Also this poem reminds me of a Nora Jone song so simple and sweet, I am glad it move u to feel something that's what it is all about. Thanks again.

    mbryant53 commented on Come Too Me......

    12-09-2009

    It is the longing in all of us put there by our creator. We are meant to be and give love . Prhaps you wrote this from old memories?

    Hampton commented on Come Too Me......

    11-23-2009

    This is a nicely done romantic write that should appeal to all.

    infiniti

    11/23/2009

    I like this sweet little piece. It feels and sounds like a song Nora Jones would sing.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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