Darkness

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    Darkness

    I'm standing in the dark
    waiting for a hand to guide me
    so long i have been waiting
    i can feel my stubble grow long
    my joints grow week
    my hair recedes
    I'm an old man now
    whithering away in the dark
    faithfully awaiting my guide
    but you never came.
    you knew i was there
    but you let me die...
    with nothing surrounding me but darkness
    no one to talk to , to hold , to love
    you let me die, in the dark, alone.
    with my final breath
    i see your lovely face
    and one silent tear escapes me.
    i was a fool to think you'd come back.
    i wasted my life, waiting, hoping
    and what did i get?
    i got a life worse than death
    i got a life without you.

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    ivecute77 commented on Darkness

    11-17-2008

    sad, and yet often so true for many.

    Hailey commented on Darkness

    11-15-2008

    i really like this peom!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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