Change

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    I hate who I became
    In those last few years
    It was me as a slave
    In a river of fears
    No one would help
    A man on the verge
    They would only yelp
    When it would emerge
    Anyone that tried
    Their eyes would soon be closed
    I wish I could have cried
    But that emotion had long ago closed
    I tried to let go
    Of the beast I had become
    It wasn't easy to resist
    But it had to be done
    Now I look at you from a distance
    Afraid of what would could be
    If we ever had an instance
    When I wasn't me.

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Change

    10-06-2009

    I like the last verse of the poem. It's like you realize you have changed and now you look back and are afraid of what could have been before you changed or with the old you. Very good and rather creative.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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