Damned was the First Man

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    Damned was the First Man

    I know my soul is dead

    For I am here

    In hell

    I know my soul is dead

    For these words are bare

    I know my soul is dead

    For no one's warmth

    For me they have to share

    I know my soul is dead

    For it never lived from the start

    But Maybe it does live

    Some place

    For a tear

    I now shed





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    jademelissa74 commented on Damned was the First Man

    09-03-2009

    At face value, this poem is quite painful. It is said, that a soul is an immaterial part of a living being. In my humble opinion, it is simply the consciousness and personality of a human being. I love the way you end the poem, since indeed, if a tear has been shed, your spirit/soul is alive, for it feels and longs redemption. This is a nicely conveyed dark poem. Great job.
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