Blushing Urges of a Teen

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    Blushing Urges of a Teen

     Blushing Urges of a Teen

    Taronis -- 04

     

    I saw your exquisite sun tanned flesh

    Dripping, shivering, after your splash

    I saw you walk and shake less sodden

    Oh the image stays with me unforgotten

     

    I saw your long and subtle limbs

    As you shaved them soft and pink

    Then you saw me and quietly smiled

    Soap and lake water in a flirting trickle

     

    As you smiled I did not go

    By your smile you invited my attention

    Lurid urges I had back then

    Watching your hair in that summer wind

     

    Though we never spoke that day

    You knew what I thought and would not say

    I dared not stand in your full view

    Tight drawn shorts wet with dew

     

    It took me days to speak your name

    It took me hours my loins to tame

    But I took that step in an August rain

    And spoke to you just the same

     

     

     

     

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    ginga commented on Blushing Urges of a Teen

    12-23-2009

    ta, The subject matter is alluring. The fact the man gets up his courage to finally approach the woman is gallant. Chivalry is not dead! A 10+ from me. I have 2 posts that are a similar genre to this poem if you care to read them :" Be With Me" and"Touch." ginga
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    susanismith commented on Blushing Urges of a Teen

    07-28-2009

    Your words were well played...loving the tease throughout the read...anticipating what the next step is...it definitley drew me in and flowed smoothly like a song... Thank you.
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    ta

    12/22/2009

    thanks :)

    wheelsal commented on Blushing Urges of a Teen

    06-25-2009

    This is poetry perfection. How have I missed you before this............................................
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    cousinsoren commented on Blushing Urges of a Teen

    06-25-2009

    Thix is a lyrical jewel. Rhyming scheme is perfect. Musicality and imagery exquisitely sustained by effectively chosen monosyllabic words which breathes sincerity of admiration and adoration throughout the entire poem. Rating 10+
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    ta

    06/25/2009

    ozzy ozborne will set it to music....lol

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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