Banshee

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    • is wondering what life has for me this life is to short to wait

    Banshee

     The Banshee screams
    a cold life less dream
    whatever may seem
    is a lie in between
    Satan's laugh a scornful thing
    not taken lightly when the banshee screams
    help me help me in the dark of the night
    but all that is heard is a taunting laugh
    deaths bells toll for the dead aloud
    for the banshee to hear their only sign
    sadly for them
    they only exist in the back of my mind

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    juggalo4life commented on Banshee

    05-30-2009

    wow...i love this kind of poems...you described it so well i could see it in my mind...this is a very good poem..keep it up
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    cakewalk

    06/01/2009

    i can have a dark side to life it can be darker trust me

    sher92 commented on Banshee

    05-29-2009

    i like this poem. It's short and sweet. you used imagery(sp?) very well! I can relate...i feel in the dark sumtime
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    cakewalk

    05/30/2009

    thanks sher i try ;)

    bforibus commented on Banshee

    05-28-2009

    this poem is hot. i loved the darkness undertones and the bold ones as well. it played the end of days with characters. good job
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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