Anticipation

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    Anticipation

    I light up thinking of what can be
    You, me
    A young love waiting for a chance
    Will it be?
    I dear to think most definitely

    Hope for a future of true romance
    Opportunity, eternity
    A life together i dream secretly
    Well let's see
    Am I for you and are you for me?

    Should we run the risk seriously?
    Trust, sincerity
    Take the leap, a true alliance
    Marriage, family
    How I wish this to be our destiny

    Hold my tongue, wait with patience
    Slowly, surely
    Our race to happiness, finish finally
    Truely, deeply
    To love you totally and completely.

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    FreeBird02 commented on Anticipation

    04-02-2010

    Strong metaphors which are sending a clear message to your other heart, you feel beating so sincere. I will review more of your work you have a pleasant style. FreeBird 02
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    geeshie1

    04/03/2010

    thanks a lot and i look forward to your reviews :-) it will be greatly appreciated.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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