All You Do

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  • Kary
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Friendship is a gift that can be broken if not treasured 

All You Do

Unlock the mysteries inside of me
Take my heart an set it free
Break the spell that I am under
Read my thoughts and all I wonder
Reach inside and feel my soul
Take my love, make me whole
Fill the emptiness inside
Where long ago my feelings died
Wake me from this lonesome slumber
Don't let me drown, I am going under
Let me breath the air so sweet
Help me stand on my own two feet
Rescue me, I am beginning to fall
Tell me I can handle it all
Be by my side when I am alone
Feel my pain if I should moan
Wipe my tears if they should flow
Hold me tight, don't let me go
Be there for me, don't hesitate
Hear my call, don't be late
Share with me all you know
Help me live, help me grow
Be my friend in all you do
And I will do the same for you

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mamasan commented on All You Do

11-03-2009

Nice read and I especially liked the slow-paced beat which allowed me to savor and look inside myself; surely I thought I have been there too, and survived. Survived because my friend allowed me to 'be'....... Now, I try to remember the name of the friend.......an innervoice whispers: "maybe it was you".

bklynrizz commented on All You Do

11-02-2009

I agree with aliciagall this is definitley the definition of unconditional love. Beautiful. Keep writing.

shannie76 commented on All You Do

10-31-2009

I really like your writing and the way the words play out. This is awesome.

aliciagall commented on All You Do

10-28-2009

This is the definition of unconditional love. I could not decide if you were talking about a lover or a friend but I guess it would just be LOVE and it would not matter.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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