Your Eyes

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    • blaquegoddess
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    Your Eyes

    When I look deep into your eyes
    your soul shares this beautiful story
    of love, hurt, deceit, and lies,
    when I look deep into your eyes
    your heart begins to swell
    you break into a cold sweat
    as your pulse begin to rise,
    when I look deep into your eyes
    your breathing becomes heavy and deep
    is it because your emotions are lost
    or the fear I may see you weep,
    when I look deep into your eyes
    your hands begin to shake
    is it because your body is feeling awake,
    when I look into your eyes
    your legs begin to move
    because your are one step closer to getting
    in the groove,
    when I looked into your eyes
    I saw something you didn't want me to see,
    you making passionate love to a woman, and
    that woman happens to be me

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    squadbuddy954 commented on Your Eyes

    12-29-2009

    This poem was very creative your style is amazing keep writing because I will keep reading

    LadyL714 commented on Your Eyes

    03-20-2009

    Very nicely done.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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