The Clouds and Rain

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    • blaquegoddess
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    The Clouds and Rain

    Last night I experienced the clouds and rain,
    in a way so sensational I thought I would go insane,
    my twin white peaks were washed, caressed, and kissed,
    I don't think it wasn't a place your red lotus peak didn't miss,
    the whole while i was wishing you'd take your flowery pool and jade fluid and water my red lotus peak that you'd find near my jade gate,
    polishing and shinning the pearl on the jade step until the flood of yin tide could no longer wait,
    now that all the petals have been watered on your jade stem i'm ready to receive it take it all in,
    placing it through the inner door and carrying it to the palace of yin,
    once you've reached your destination its ok to let go by surrendering,
    the purpose of the clouds and rain is for the jade gate to except the male ching.

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    MsKrystle commented on The Clouds and Rain

    07-18-2009

    I like it....I like how you make it erotic without coming right out and saying it...painted a nice picture.

    darkchile commented on The Clouds and Rain

    05-08-2009

    I just love a poem about rain. That is about the only thing i miss from my childhood.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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