wrong path in life

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    wrong path in life

     So you've chosen the wrong path 
    you've done all that you thought was "FUN"
    and soon enough u will not be able to "RUN"
    sooner or later you start to go through pain
    and now you're starting to go insane
    you've become so vain
    now it's your dignity that you must regain

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    cmlestrade commented on wrong path in life

    08-30-2009

    Brief but very good and to the point. The theme and the rhyming were good.
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