losing me slowly!

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    losing me slowly!

     losing me slowly but you just can't see
    Your to busy with your friends or your studies or what ever it may be
    You should of never went away
    and leave me here to suffer and pay
    Sooner or later I'm gonna give up and just quit!
    You forgot that I'm your wife and that I need your attention
    You know of all the s**t that's going on here but you still leave me in my depression
    No one understand the pain I'm going through.
    losing my unborn twins and most of you never even knew
    being forgotten by my husband 
    and abandoned my my family too
    I hate feeling used
    and I hate being Bruised
    I hate it that I'm trying to b better but I'm constantly being pushed to do bad
    so I'm telling you this....
    You're losing me slowly but you just can't see
    You're sitting with you friends 
    or doing something els
    Forgetting your so called "wifey"
    Sooner or later I'm gonna give up!

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    cmlestrade commented on losing me slowly!

    07-25-2009

    good effort Sunnah. The depth of the feeling in your poetry amazes me. I must admit to being very ignorant however, I did not think women in your country were given free reign to express their views so openly. I am glad I am wrong. You have seen a lot at a vey very young age. your writing is filled with emotion and passion. At 17 I was trying to connive to get this boy to ask me to the prom and now I ask myself why. All I can say is that your poetry has enriched my life,thank goodness.
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    sunnah3

    07/25/2009

    thank you so much for you comments, it really encourages me to write more! thanks a bunches sweetie!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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