Blood i see.

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    Blood i see.

     Blood is all I can see
    Screams is all i can plee
    It's all running down my feet
    and i fall to the floor feeling as if i was beat
    they were only 15 weeks
    but they were little babies with hands a face n cheeks
    They were cover in blood but still so pure
    and in come there daddy coming throught the door
    He saw my blood and them with me
    and all i can do was Cry "Sorry"
    He started to cry and came to me
    He couldn't say a word and didn't even try

    Blood was all we can see
    Dripping down my legs
    and all over the babies
    He took them from me 
    and just walked away
    I closed my eyes and I prayed
     
    ..so i opened my eyes..


    Blood was all I can see,
    dripping down my legs 
    and covering the floor.
    I looked around as I tryed and crawled.
    Our white walls had my bloody hand prints as I stood up
    I fel to my knees grabbed my stomach
    And for hours all I did was cry
    Knowing they were gone
    Left me wanting to die..

    I didn't talk for two days
    haden't left my room at all
    Haven't had a thing to eat
    I just let my tears fall

    months have passed since that 5th of may
    but it flashes in mind like it was just today!


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    cmlestrade commented on Blood i see.

    08-08-2009

    What a memory of pain. In a way I wish i could erase it from your mind but if that would happen there wouldn't be such depth to your writing. This is sad, tragic even, but the love for your lost ones is deeply embedded in your heart. I know you will love them forever that is the true mark of a mother. My prayers as always for you
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    fathi1943 commented on Blood i see.

    07-27-2009

    Depth of emotion that is understandable in such situation and a tragic event for any woman. I wish you were attended to and not left alone to bleed and suffer. Your husband should have had a better role.
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    sunnah3

    07/27/2009

    thank you for your comment!

    hdmac commented on Blood i see.

    07-25-2009

    Rich poem with powerful imagery. So were you having a baby at the time when you wrote this? The centre part of your poem was a little confusing.
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    sunnah3

    07/25/2009

    thanks 4 ur comment!sorry it was abit confusing so i edited it! is it ok now???

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