Within my Heart

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Within my Heart

                Fine and true ,
 I wish my countenance to be
  brave  and noble ,like knights and kings
making all the right decisions
walking like a righteous man
acting on behalf of many
 and carried by the angels wings
 
But alas I am just a mortal man
with faults,and fears, and many wrongs
 filled with the best intentions
so many meaningless , unfinished songs
please dont judge me
for what I do
but observe what I strive for
within my heart
Look not upon the things I've failed at
but all the good I've tried to start

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cmlestrade commented on Within my Heart

08-12-2009

Great read, nice and rhythmical. Lovely message. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Fendire

08/12/2009

Thankyou

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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