Why would you?

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    This is a poem about my first boyfriend we broke up a few months ago here i am still cring yet he moved on like it was nothing. I let him to my heart and he broke it.

    Why would you?

    Why can i not love back?
    I gave you the Keys to my heart.
    And you twisted it backwards in my heart.
    I learned to love again.
    To trust again.
    Here you go breaking my heart.
    And Trust.
    And it was only a dare!
    Oh, go out with the outcast!
    They said.
    Why would you do that.
    Tears slip down my cheeks.
    Love hurts.
    I thought you cared.
    How could you?
    You knew i cared about something for once.
    And you break it.
    I hope you feel good.
    Never to see my Smile again.
    Hope is lost i know now i am an Outcast.

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    Paige commented on Why would you?

    09-22-2009

    nice poem, might wanna work on rhythm but that is just something i focus on. definetely keep writing
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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