Reach out

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    I wrote this in bio its true, for we humans are far to greedy for our own good. Greed is not only in money you can see it in many other forums. Greed sits with lies giving us more and more till one day we cant handle it.

    Reach out

    We are only shadows in a pitch black room
    Yet far away i see a light
    Lit by our lies
    I reach out
    Your only a hands lenght away
    Yet we are to far from the truth.

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    Rhymer commented on Reach out

    10-18-2010

    Nice write full of descriptive images 10 from me...........................
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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