Who Cares?

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    I thought about the way i look and decided to write a poem about it.

    Who Cares?

    Who cares what you look like?
    When someone says something mean about the way we look
    We often turn away
    Not leaping over our barriers that lie before us

    Where does strength come in?
    Strength comes in when we as people
    Take that jump, big or small
    To try and tackle our problem

    Maybe change also turns in our direction!
    Sometimes we may not know it
    That bitter and sour saying might help us
    To try and take a new path

    If you are a girl
    You dont need all the make-up to look beautiful
    A nice top and skinny leg jeans
    Will definately work just as well

    If your a guy
    Dont think that you need a mustang or jaguar to get a girl to like you
    Buy her flowers or jewlery
    That would be just as nice

    Those barriers are not there for a reason
    They usually are just there
    To help you as a man or woman
    create a new path of hope and dreams

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    Dancer022597 commented on Who Cares?

    08-02-2009

    Lots of people my care but just don't let yourself care too much. Very sweet and to the point. Good job and keeep on writing!

    fawndesno10 commented on Who Cares?

    07-09-2009

    ok..this is a really good poem...i also wanted to thank you for your comments...i hav more poems you should check out.

    jandh4ever

    07/09/2009

    thank you. I will ne sure to check out more of your poems

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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