Who am I?

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  • Confusion

    Who am I?
    Who am I?

    I am who I pretend to be.
    Only I can unlock my destiny.
    Acceptance is the key
    to live my life happy everyday.
    The years seem to drift away,
    But lessons are learned
    and another leaf is turned.

    Who am I?

    I am life.
    I am death.
    I am good.
    I am evil.

    Who am I?

    The flower of life.
    The never ending creativity.
    The energy that is always
    in the state of becoming.

    Who am I?

    I am dull.
    I am creative.
    I am ugly.
    I am beautiful.

    Who am I?

    I am who i am
    and only time will tell.

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    FreeBird02 commented on Who am I?

    03-26-2010

    I can see a sequel of "Due to I Time Will Tell" resting at the hearth of "Who Am I". Your message is quite bold, quite warm, and deeply realistic, and above most of us. Please do us all a favor, write another version in a deeper stanza so that more will see what I do see, as my heart lifts, each time a reread "Who Am I". FreeBird 02
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    gotmadgame52

    03/27/2010

    Thank you for you comment and feedback. Perhaps when I'm at work tonight I can find the words and feelings of a deeper meaning of the poem.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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