Dark Soul

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Dark Soul

I stare into the mirror trying to reach my soul.
I take a breath.
In quickly and out slowly.
Another deep breath.
I feel my heart beating
Faster then slower.
 Slower then faster.

As I gaze into my eyes
feeling like i'm falling,
falling into this hole
that is leading me to my soul.

I find nothing but a hole
that has left nothing more
than this pain and fear
that was left long ago.


I take a deep breath
In quickly and out slowly.
One more deep breath.
I feel my heart skip a beat.
As if my soul was trying to escape.

My soul is trapped in this desert.
A desert full of black sand
that has no will,
that has no joy,
it sits and waits as the days go by.

The drought has taken over,
feeling my soul drifting away
into the darker nights and colder days.

As I travel into the darkness
which I can tell is eager.
Eager to finish off the little good
that I still have left within.

I take one last breath
and I begin to cry.

My soul has lost all hope.

The sadness brings me to my knees
as my happiness flies away.

The pain will never heal
because my pleasure was never there.

The fear cuts deeper into my soul
as my freedom disappears.

I have lost my sanity
along with the light in my soul.

Is there anyone out there
strong enough to help me;
battle this evil and let the good prevail.

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Rhymer commented on Dark Soul

04-01-2010

Trapped, lost and searching for someone to rescue the soul. Strength to overcome has to come from within. Excellent write 10 from me. Your poem reminded me of one of my own "Searching" Have a read if you find time.

gotmadgame52

04/03/2010

Thank you. I had wrote this poem like two falls ago. So far I feel this has been some of my best written imagery. Oh and your poem "Searching" was amazing thank you for sharing.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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