Whisper I Love You

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    Whisper I Love You

    I was bless by god
    When I met you
    Your what I have been looking for
    Thank you for begin here
    I adore you
    I love you beyond the word love
    You are the breath of my lungs
    The beat of my heart
    The light which brighten my eyes each and every day
    I adore my life with you
    If I could make yours different
    I would set you free
    Just to see you come back
    In a second to say how much you missed me,
    I will confess to you I miss you too.
    I love you
    Yet can't give solutions to all of our problems
    But together we can seek answers.
    I can't change our heartache and pain
    But we can be there for each other
    I will not judge you
    But support and encourage you
    I can't give you boundaries
    Just give you room to change
    I will be there when your heart is breaking
    When tears are falling
    I'll help you pick up the pieces
    I may not be able to do much
    But I can love you through it all
    Today is is forever
    Everyday is a new beginning
    Because yesterday is trails of the past
    And tomorrow may never come
    I love you forever.
    Love is hard to handle
    Be gentle with yourself
    Feel honored that love came knocking at your door
    Treat your lover
    As you would treat yourself
    Be grateful it came to your life
    As I am hugging you
    I whisper I love you...

    By,Adminda Cintron
    January 5,2009

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    mysticangel commented on Whisper I Love You

    02-28-2009

    Very romantic and heartwarming. I really think this is a winner. Thanks for sharing.

    aggieprof commented on Whisper I Love You

    02-28-2009

    Has very good possibilities but needs work. Check your tenses i.e."blessed" not "bless" in first line. "Being" not "begin" in 4th line. These are just examples.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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