Whiskey Colored Dreams

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    Whiskey Colored Dreams

    Unprotected in my dreams
    left alone at night,
    flashbacks of loving you
    always seem so right.

    I put on a happy face
    on the outside everything looks fine.
    On the inside I'm so lonely,
    I truly wish that you were mine.

    Reaching for the bottle
    trying to block out your memory.
    I can't get you out of mind
    there's just not enough whiskey.

    Drowning in my shot glass
    are all my hopes and fears.
    If I can just drink some more
    the memory of you will disappear.

    Calling you on the phone
    after I've had too many to drink.
    I try to be indifferent
    but my tongue catches and I can't speak.

    I can feel my heart,
    its breaking in two.
    Maybe just another shot
    and I won't think of you.

    Twelve steps mean nothing to me;
    I've already tried my best.
    You're so far away from me,
    you've ruined me for all the rest.

    I can't promise to be sober
    or that I won't have whiskey on my breath
    because drinking is the only way
    to deal with why you left.

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    redbloodink commented on Whiskey Colored Dreams

    02-01-2010

    I lived this after a love during another that was falling apart.... and a gain in love with a new...... I found one thing out for sure... the drunker I got the sicker and lonelier I became....... I just learned to forget their names..... thanx.... you just made one for me... a write that is... red

    HarverTomsson commented on Whiskey Colored Dreams

    07-20-2009

    Your best revenge will come hard, by creating for yourself a brighter future, he'll regret not loving you before you became a star.

    shanny8917 commented on Whiskey Colored Dreams

    07-20-2009

    I'm a recovering alcoholic and friend of Bill W for a year now and this poem was the theme song of my life. Thanks for sharing your struggle.

    PRober commented on Whiskey Colored Dreams

    06-25-2009

    good! could almost be a country & western song. lol!

    Huff commented on Whiskey Colored Dreams

    11-12-2008

    A great read...I could definately feel your emotions

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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