When You Fall

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  • Lost Love

    When You Fall

    Love is a cliff
    you wonder upon
    in the dark of night;
    you never know it's there
    until you fall.
    And yes sometimes
    you fall and
    it's a rocky cliff
    and you have
    a rough time getting
    through what is going to happen.
    But once you hit
    the bottom
    you can get up
    and hopefully you can see
    what is in front of you
    when the sun rises.

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    Dori commented on When You Fall

    03-09-2009

    Awsome Poem

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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