Whats So Perfect About You?

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    • alexan
    • life is not a dream, people would say. I confused my reality with my dreams. Isan't that a bad thing? I don't really think so because deja vu really happens, its true

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    this is about one of those boys that want to be all that

    Whats So Perfect About You?

     Big eyes,
    Light skin,
    Deep eyelashes,
    Lean,
    Mustles,
    Soft lips,
    Soft skin,
    Hazel sparkling eyes,
    Nice clothes,
    Smooth voice,
    and.....a low cut...

    Whats' so speical about you?
    Just because you have those beautiful eyes
    Doesn't mean you can get whatever

    Whats' speical about your skin?
    Your no speical then anyone eles

    Who do you think you are?
    What do you think you are?

    I say a nobody
    People say' OH snap he's sooo hot' or Oh My Gawd, he's sooo adorable'

    WHATS SO PERFECT ABOUT YOU?!?!?!?!

    Who are you?
    What are you?, some kind of angel
    Whats' so good about your eyes, your skin, your everything


    Whats' so perfect about you.........?...................

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    tierra7 commented on Whats So Perfect About You?

    07-23-2009

    this is a nice write, i agree w/ cliftondurant 's comment..TRUE .beauty is deep in ones Heart..., beauty on the outside can hide what is in the inside and sometimes it isn't very nice!!! get to know ones heart before hand...one's character lives within...otherwise excellent write!!
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    alexan

    07/24/2009

    thanks tierra... you also speak the truth..

    786mona commented on Whats So Perfect About You?

    07-23-2009

    wow, it is like you are asking this question to your loved one meaning you know what i mean...:) well good poem,, adn great writing:) 10 for you!
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    alexan

    07/23/2009

    wait hold up i don't like him he's stuck up and everything, but he's cute,,,, thanks for the comment

    cliftondurant commented on Whats So Perfect About You?

    07-23-2009

    sound like somebody got a chrush that's a good question to ask but true beauty is in side
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    alexan

    07/23/2009

    nah he's kinda cocky and stuck up

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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