Me, Myself and I

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    • alexan
    • life is not a dream, people would say. I confused my reality with my dreams. Isan't that a bad thing? I don't really think so because deja vu really happens, its true

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    my emtional moment

    Me, Myself and I

    I work alone
    Live alone
    Sleep alone
    Eat alone

    Never loving the weak
    Never loving the Strong
    Never love the people that stand infront of you
    Never love the one behind you
    Never fall in love with anyone

    Love another
    Be another
    Falling for another
    Cry for another
    NO!

    Makes me weak
    No stronger
    Too soft
     

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    minigirl695 commented on Me, Myself and I

    08-06-2009

    I agree with Chaos128, there will be a time when you meet someone special and all of this will vanish. But a great poem none-the-less =)
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    Chaos128 commented on Me, Myself and I

    07-29-2009

    A lot of people have felt the way you do, Brook, myself included. It helps to know you're not alone. The good news is, you're not always gonna feel like that. There will come people in your life that will engender trust in you, and will make you feel safe enough to care. Do you realize how much better this poem is than the first one I read? You are improving significantly because you're beginning to recognize your power to communicate.
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    alexan

    08/02/2009

    thanx, i know, but it feels that way, they are all aenst me, thats why i wrote this deprssing poem

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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