What's Hidden Within

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What's Hidden Within

My thoughts fall like rain drops on window panes

It feels as though nothing will ever be the same

These thoughts betray my feeling

How can emotions be so fleeting

Why do I feel so torn

I feel so lost

Don’t know what to do

I thought my life was perfect

It all has come unglued

Now everything is upside-down

Inside out and turned around

But the worst part yet

Is I don’t know if I can handle it

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winterkou commented on What's Hidden Within

07-15-2010

nice poem expressing the emotions that are held within. Sometime we find oursleves in a jam but for me God helps pull me out.

Dano commented on What's Hidden Within

04-22-2010

the feelings expressed through these words strike a strong chord in me... very relatable... nicely written

cliftondurant commented on What's Hidden Within

02-10-2010

Sometime it's tough but we wil overcome if we keep on trying nice job

redbloodink commented on What's Hidden Within

02-10-2010

stand........ God says He will never put more on us then we can withstand........ nice write..... great flow..... red

chubbc commented on What's Hidden Within

02-08-2010

powerful poem i like it i see u used that line you wrote on yahoo that is a good line those types of feelings are all to familiar to me great read

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Love Lost 12
Thoughts of the Past 11
Behind the Facade 9
the not so immaculate 8
Why 9
What's Hidden Within 6
The Cutter 15
You and Me 9
Letting Go 12
Alone 15
The Depression of Youth 18
Promises 6
Good-bye 5
Ending It All 12
Darkness 9
What I Thought You Were 6
The Fire 22