what your eyes cant see

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    what your eyes cant see

     what's  love
    Can't you see
    I can be everything that you need
    How strong is like
    I can say the words
    and mean it, true
    but words are empty
    if you don't feel it too
    Detailed emotions
    More elaborate then speaking
    Can ever be
    Miss me, Do you
    I only think of you once in a day
    because you never left my mind in the first place
    tell me to stay
    why am i feening
    for something that might not even be there
    this greed i have developed
    is so bittersweet
    Ba Moin en ti Bo
    Lets make it last for eternity...

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    Nataly commented on what your eyes cant see

    02-04-2010

    no prob and thank you
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    Jodes commented on what your eyes cant see

    02-03-2010

    Thank you for the Creole you put in there. Much love, and respect. I love that poem, and I like your smile too.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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