What have I done?

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    What have I done?

     Is this all deserving
    The silence is unnerving
    The lonliness haunting
    The emptiness daunting

    What have I done
    For my sunshine to be ?
    For gray the gray sky- I see only
    The curtains are now drawn
    slowly

    My world feels quiet
    My heart so still
    Only a flicker of light remains
    Like the sun disappearing
    Behind the hill
    Afraid to move
    for fear
    the light will disappear
    Please just keep shining for awhile more

    Would I have started this love
    I have found
    If I knew this day
    was coming down
    to where everything
    becomes quiet and there
    is no sound
    of two hearts beating
    together no more
    gone from my world
    what was it for?

    Frightened is what I feel
    and when not all is still then
    like an empty room spins around
    I have nothing to grab hold of
    I dont know which way
    to go toward
    No more to look forward
    only this world I created
    of saddness and despair
    I wonder will I ever
    crawl out of..and if
    I do
    will anyone care?

    Please dont touch me
    Please just let me be
    I couldnt stand to
    feel again only to loose
    and again feel lonely
    My words once said
    "There is my hand at myside"
    once again" solely
    I walk the road
    Clouds and rain never
    seem to go away
    No sunshine from this day forward
    From now on this will be the way
    Will I ever ,ever be ok?

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    gogant commented on What have I done?

    10-19-2009

    You do know, oreo, that, "it is better to have loved and lost, than never..." Smile and the world smiles with you...there will come another chance at love...perhaps better than this.......................g
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    oreo5560

    10/19/2009

    maybe!..thanks for comment

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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