A Place here within me.....

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    A Place here within me.....

    The world i was in
    before their was you
    was one of lonliness,this
    is true.
    Who would have known
    with all that I had
    still i felt lonely and sad.

    Opportunity comes along
    and sometimes just once
    so I went with that hunch
    closed my eyes and took the
    chance
    How good it felt to once again
    dance!

    You lifted me up-up
    off the ground
    brought me to heights that
    had been lost now
    again found

    It wasnt suppose to
    go as it has
    an affair of the heart
    but soon I was certain I felt it start!

    I could just look in your
    eyes forever -see into your
    soul
    "a being" we all should be lucky to know

    Your smile...I love so much
    big and true
    It can always make me happy and
    smile along with you

    By all accounts what we
    have is forbidden
    so my love for now it must
    be kept hidden
    from those who just
    dont know
    what its like
    to find that once in a life
    a match to your soul.
    The one who inspires
    to be all you know
    and makes you believe
    you can overcome it
    all.

    If goodbyes are due
    I could never forget
    The time spent with you
    will be time I'll never regret!

    All has a reason
    I believe in fate
    But will I ever know
    why we were brought together
    in this life so late

    as I sit here
    so much alone,afraid
    to lose what we shared
    and have known

    I know you must go and prepare
    A plan to go and move toward
    and if goodbyes are due
    I will step aside for you
    to move forward,but
    before I do
    please come to me
    look into my eyes and think
    if it could be
    and hold me close
    touch my heart,feel it
    beat
    and if still you must go
    to find your other true soul
    maybe just once more you
    could love me body,heart whole.
    before it is tomorrow
    when my heart begins to fill
    with sorrow

    When i watch you you go
    and my tears begin to flow
    I'll think how lucky she'll be and
    I will for sure envy!
    but
    always remember ,forget never
    you'll always have a place here
    within me
    where my love for you lives on
    forever.............

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    SSuchorzewski commented on A Place here within me.....

    10-13-2009

    Excellent Although I cannot relate to the married part, I can actually feel the loneliness before and after the relationship. I like the way you put yourself in a whirlwind of emotion and bliss and then come crashing down back to that place where i t feels like you'll never be there again but then come to terms with the happy memories of the relationship. Very nice job :)

    oreo5560

    10/13/2009

    wow-thank you so much for ur comment - i like the way you stated all the emotions running through my poem!

    haskins commented on A Place here within me.....

    09-30-2009

    I really can relate to this poem. I fell in love with a married man once. We would sneek out time and time again. I felt the pain of this poem. Someone like me and the person in this poem never seem to win. Men like that will never leave their wives. A very heart-felt poem. You captured what very few people know about. Expressed very well.

    oreo5560

    09/30/2009

    Yes you are right about all u have said..and I thank u!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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