Love for you

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    Love for you

    I just stood there frustarted
    drained and helpless
    Life wouldn't allow
    for me to come to you
    and i was forced to watch
    through this plexiglass wall.

    How you hurt and cried
    and all i could do
    was stand and watch you fall
    with me splayed against this
    damn wall!

    I knew for certain on that day
    This was love I felt!
    But I must accept and deal with
    what life has dealt

    My heart hurt so bad for you
    I only hoped you knew
    I was here and
    how much I loved and cared too!

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    LindasLife commented on Love for you

    09-28-2009

    Beautiful,you will go far.Feelings in words are great stories of ones life.God bless.

    oreo5560

    09/28/2009

    I agree..thank you for your compliment!

    Blueroad commented on Love for you

    09-25-2009

    It's a good poem. I liked reading it. I think, poetry is something like recording the moments. And, you've done well in this regard.

    oreo5560

    09/25/2009

    Thank you for your thoughts and i think you are right about poetry-it is like recording the moments in life..again thank you ..debbie

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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