Night Has Fallen

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    Night Has Fallen

    I just sit here staring
    off into somewhere-
    where I dont know
     
    I feel frozen inside,so cold
    fighting the tears that rim my eyes and
    sting my soul
     
    Ah it was-all against the rules
    so now I pay a price
    I suppose heartache and saddness is just?
    it must
    cause thats what I feel
    and I dont know what it will take
    for this kind of pain to heal
    At least for me in my lifetime
     
    When did loving someone
    become so bad?
    isnt there enough
    hate in this
     world
    to be had?
     
    I just wanted to give my heart to you
    and all "we" were missing in our lives too
    You made it safe for me to do so
    You've always made me feel safe
    A warm soft place to fall,you were
    and i wanted to be that place for you as well
    Afraid now to turn around
    in fear of seeing the hard ground
    my only place to fall now
     
    I'm so cold,from head to toe
    nothing seems to warm me
    The night has fallen
    I see darkness out this window
    I staren out of
    Like the darkness thats
    between us now
     
    How much more can i possibly cry
    I just want to get through tonight
    tomorrows just another day
    I'll fight
    to understand
    why Im losing my best friend/
    this just cant be
    why can't I make this right
     
    Flashes of you
    crash against my brain
    and I have no control
    it never seems to stop
     
    but i need a break
    my mind and heart need
    some rest
     
    Its morning
    and it all starts again!

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    haskins commented on Night Has Fallen

    10-20-2009

    I really like this...It reminds me of how I feel every day copeing with my husbands death...I miss him so much...I feel all this hearbreak and emptiness and it becomes nightfall...I go to sleep and in the morning, it starts all over again...very good...This really touched my heart....

    oreo5560

    10/21/2009

    thank you so much for ur comments!--and im sorry you lost your husband.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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