UNTITLED

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  • Lost Love

    UNTITLED

    Days pass and nights end,
    To you I wish my love I could send,
    Its hard to accept that I’m finally down,
    When before tough and serious I used to sound.

    I was unbeatable and I was cold,
    But you came along and my heart I sold,
    My weakness I found my match I met,
    I couldn’t leave for my heart on fire you set.

    I fell, I fell for you deeply,
    And I can no longer roam around freely,
    If its not with you I don’t know what to do,
    I love you ill admit it, its true.

    I cant look at you without remembering it all,
    I try to stand strong but without you I just fall,
    Happy I was glad I was,
    There wasn’t anyone like us.

    We were something else,
    “Forget her she doesn’t even love you,” he tells,
    And I accept that true that might be,
    But maybe if we tried, is what I want you to see.

    You broke me so why don’t you keep going,
    That love in me please keep sowing,
    All I need is for you to be here,
    So maybe someday ill wipe away these tears.

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    phatgirl commented on UNTITLED

    06-26-2009

    It is good to see a young man getting in touch with his deeper feelings. If more people would express the feelings then I feel there would be less evil doing in the world.

    poet831

    08/20/2009

    even ive done my share of evil things, but ive never been able to express myself freely, and punching holes through walls really never helped...so i found that writing helped me, and i just started writing, but i agree i wished more would learn to keep in touch with themselves...

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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