Twenty Years.

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    Twenty Years.

     You know how I Struggle,
    You know how I think.
    I could lay on this floor for Hours
    To think of Everything you've never said
    I contemplate my thoughts,
    Your thoughts,
    And why it's Still the same
    Over twenty years now,
    And You haven't changed a thing.

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Twenty Years.

    10-18-2010

    I love this. The rhythm, flow, and thought are all on point. I know the feeling that the other person is standing still while you are moving and progressing. Great write.......E
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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