These Things Take Time.

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    Things in your life take time. Don't give up just because it's not working for you now, or just because you may feel jaded. Just know that your time comes and when it does Oh what a day that will be.

    These Things Take Time.

    It's Always the beginning,
    that takes me by suprise.
    It takes hold, doesn't let go.
         I feel suffocated.
    Until,
    About half way through the day,
    I tell you all the time,
    It brightens my day.
    Even when it seems as though
    Nothing, or no one could.
    That feeling so Lovely,
    So treasured by me.
    It means a lot, as you may not have seen.
    That hidden feeling i secretly adore.

    It's been a while.

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    Sx9 commented on These Things Take Time.

    10-30-2010

    yes it is,and must have felt great,for the wise will tell you,all thing are in your mind and your soul will rejoice for the feelings exposed,,taking time like life,love and growing kids,,love your lines to the point and yes I get it..

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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