The Way Out.

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    The Way Out.

     "Where's the Hope?" They say
    You've Never looked close enough.
    You find it in the small things;
    The music,
    The children,
    The trees.

    Smothered by the world,
    Blinded by a Hate you knew nothing of
    It's cold,
    It's dark,
    It's vile, unjust.
         It consumes you.

    "Shrug it off" they say,
    "It's just a game we're all forced to play."

    I'll try til i die
    To find the way Out.

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    Wakeitha commented on The Way Out.

    12-18-2011

    We all struggle in life but we sometime cant win the fight because we try to do it ourself and we drawn. If we let the Almighty who's hands is always out to give us a hand. Then let him fight the fight for us then we will win.Chris Jesus is the hand.
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on The Way Out.

    10-18-2010

    This poem is so poignant and so indicative of all of us, because at some pouint in time we have all felt alone. You expressed beautifully and sorrowfully. Bravo!!........E
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    mustascheman commented on The Way Out.

    10-17-2010

    There is a pungence of loneliness emanating from the very pore of this write. I LIKE IT. I too feel this way often, the writes I have on here are a small portion of what I have written before and removed from this site. Anyway...good job..I'll look forward to reading more from you.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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