TRY

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    • nativegyrl83
    • i will hav sum new poems soon...sorry i havent been connecting wit it...been going thru alot

    TRY

     I sit n wonder
    Many thoughts run thru
    Some I let slide
    Others I cant let go

    Can this be
    The end of you n me
    The time we shared
    I wonder if u even cared

    I tried once again
    To open my heart
    BUT I LOST
    So my heart is the cost

    I repay in tears
    Tears that flow
    Flow so warmly
    Warmly against my cheeks

    I sit n wonder
    Can this be
    The end of you n me
    I wonder if you even cared

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    countrypoet commented on TRY

    01-15-2010

    I can so relate to this poem as I met a wonderful woman that I love very much.I know that she has feelings for me too,but sometimes has doubts and pulls away from because she has been hurt before by someone,who didn't love her.This is a very well written poem and expresses how I feel right now. Terry
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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