TRY

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    • nativegyrl83
    • i will hav sum new poems soon...sorry i havent been connecting wit it...been going thru alot

    TRY

     I sit n wonder
    Many thoughts run thru
    Some I let slide
    Others I cant let go

    Can this be
    The end of you n me
    The time we shared
    I wonder if u even cared

    I tried once again
    To open my heart
    BUT I LOST
    So my heart is the cost

    I repay in tears
    Tears that flow
    Flow so warmly
    Warmly against my cheeks

    I sit n wonder
    Can this be
    The end of you n me
    I wonder if you even cared

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    countrypoet commented on TRY

    01-15-2010

    I can so relate to this poem as I met a wonderful woman that I love very much.I know that she has feelings for me too,but sometimes has doubts and pulls away from because she has been hurt before by someone,who didn't love her.This is a very well written poem and expresses how I feel right now. Terry
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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