INVISIBLE

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  • nativegyrl83
  • i will hav sum new poems soon...sorry i havent been connecting wit it...been going thru alot

INVISIBLE

Can you hear my cries
Can you see my tears
Can you feel my pain
Can they be heard

Does anybody listen
Does anybody see
Will somebody come
Will somebody care

My back against the wall
My head in my hands
Will somebody save me
Save me from myself

Can ANYONE hear my plea
I cry against the dark
I try to fight back
Fight back the tears

I FEEL SO INVISIBLE.....

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melaquejudy commented on INVISIBLE

12-22-2010

Yes, in answer to your fisrst stanza! Your pain is palpable in this poem! I fear that most poets feel too deeply! Do not let life get you. After all, you have a beautiful Morning Star!!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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