Morning Star

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    • nativegyrl83
    • i will hav sum new poems soon...sorry i havent been connecting wit it...been going thru alot

    Morning Star

    She is only half of me
    Her voice is hers alone
    Her wants, well,
    They are hers too

    She is only half of him
    Still her voice is hers
    Her needs, well,
    They are ours to share

    She is a part of us
    Still she is her own

    To look at her
    Becoming her
    She is only but seven
    You would think more like eleven

    To us she is ours
    To her she is hers
    To them she is theirs
    To you she is who

    Who is she
    What is she

    A Blessing from There
    A treasure from here
    An adventure to share
    Only she will decide
    Her alone


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    countrypoet commented on Morning Star

    01-03-2010

    Thank you for sharing this very beautiful poem.Children are a blessing from God and all sparkle with their own unique talents and perspectives.Sometimes they are wise beyond their years.

    writerspassion commented on Morning Star

    01-03-2009

    beautiful poem, i really enjoyed this one.

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Morning Star

    01-03-2009

    This poem is very good and very deep. I read it several times b4 I left this comment. It shows how complex the simplicity of life & love bring to us all.

    Phoenix9 commented on Morning Star

    12-19-2008

    very nicely done, from 9 to 25 my daughters life is a joy that continues now as i am a grandpa, a never ending story to enjoy.so enjoy too as the years go bye too fast

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Morning Star

    12-16-2008

    It is a god thing to meet another poet who is touch with the Spirit. Your poem is tenderly refreshing. Thank you for sharing.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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