Trip

1 Comments

  • GonzoHunter
  • I became insane, with rare intervals of horrible sanity

Trip

To look beyond my body, look and feel without a touch.
To see beyond the brains and minds comprehension.
The pure and simple energy waves that drive us from within.
Look inside, come a little closer,
Prepare for the colors you have yet not seen.
Feeling you have yet not felt,
The fire within the ice cave you have yet to wake.
Are you ready?

Poem Comments

(1)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

StandingBear commented on Trip

07-13-2009

A nicely written work relating a rare trip inside one's being. "The fire within the ice cave you have yet to wake" Great lines, great write.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

GonzoHunter’s Poems (10)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Where’s Your Voice? 0
vacation 0
Silence 1
Value 1
Trip 1
One Chance 3
Horse 0
Poem 1
New Day 0
Fate 1