Transfusion

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    Okay, so i guess i know how this sounds to other people, but i really like it. It's not really about killing someone else or suicide. It's on more of a spiritual level than that. It's about when you have to mature and become stronger almost, but you dont know how. The ignorance of not knowing how and how it effects your life is what penetrates you and hurts you.

    Transfusion

    im going to keep firing until the end
    you think that its a joke
    think im going to bend
    you better be careful because the gun
    is to your head

    theres blood stains on my hands
    as you fall to the floor
    the trigger pulled
    i shot the pain
    enveloping us in discord

    no tears left to cry
    yet nowhere to hide
    all you had to do
    was disappear from my eyes

    theres blood stains on my hands
    as i fall to the floor
    the bullets flew
    all my fears have come true
    transfusing me with you

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    Worthless commented on Transfusion

    03-06-2011

    Hmmm....

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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