Small Traces to Let Go

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    Small Traces to Let Go

     snow starts to fall from the sky
    leaving traces behind
    footprints from you to me

    your eyes ignite the stars
    im deafened by your sound
    sucked into the void of your world

    i have no right to feel this way
    but you took my heart
    and you tore it away
    but even though these thoughts
    in my head are only of you
    i must let go

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    Worthless commented on Small Traces to Let Go

    03-06-2011

    For a young soul you have a talent.. I see you just submitted these all today?
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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