Frozen Loss

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    Frozen Loss

     The frost burns me.
    biting the surface of skin
    that serves as my first protection,
    gaining leaverage over my defenses.
    it climbs
    till it's gruesome claw,
    grasps the area of my heart.

    Then the cycle begins.
    freezing my heart
    until it's core becomes stone,
    yet the squeezing grows with it's greed,
    from the sacrifice's irrelevent,
    mortal
    soul.
    feeding never ending hunger...

    Alone I watch the beings beyond the windows;
    peaceful,original things.
    I continue to watch till my heated
    breath falls
    upon my glass sheild.
    as my love plumits in abyss...

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    ta commented on Frozen Loss

    02-11-2010

    Not bad. This poem was written in a sense that is well beyond your indicated 14 years. very good I liked it a lot.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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